I agree that it isn't 'exciting' but im not sure what the intentions were. It is still informative. Overall it is pretty good, but unless the reader is a diehard football fan interested in the playoff race, i could see someone losing interest.
Also, for some reason this specific sentence rubbed me the wrong way.
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Jacksonville needs to be at the worst a game behind the Chiefs heading into the game.
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It doesn't flow, and it makes it seem like maybe you are predicting too much or something like that.